9:21pm/am

  The year is 2015 and murder is at a all time high in the City of  Town Work. In Town Work there is a murder investigating team's. The best tame is Nate and Tom. Nate was born and raised in Town Work. He has the mind of Sherlock Holmes. Nate loves Holmes and has read , and watch all the books, movies about him. Nate has even change his last name to Holmes. Nate kind of resemble Sherlock, Nate is 6,2 skinny and walk with a cane, he is 32. Tom is 35 and is 5,9, he is not fat but chubby, he grow up in East Orange and didn't plane to become a murder investigator. Tom wanted to be a teacher, but when he inter college he find out that teaching was not the job for him. He look for something that would keep him on his tone, and what better to do that then being a murder investigate. So here they are 4 year latter after solving a couple of murder they wound up together.

  It was two week before Christmas and like all days it was the same old same old, some old, some one got shop and kill in a back ally way, another wile gust trying to get home. Nate and Tom came in the offers at 9:30 like they do ever morning. Nate when over to the bored to see how was assigned what case. Tom sate in his desk chair that squeaked ever time it moved. " So what do we have for an case today" Tom ask Nate while turning hes case which make a squeaking sound. " Will nothing yet there are only two and, Cassidy and Melvin go the first one and James and Alicia got the second one." Reply Nate as he walked to his desk. Nate and Tom know that it would not be very long until something would happen, and they where right, but what they did not know is that this one case would change them forever.

  The chief of the murder investigating teams burst out his door with a look that the teams had ever seen on his face before. He walked towards them then pass them and had for the book that lade to the man bathroom. You could hear would sounded like him throwing up. At the moment the Mr.hender the second in charge came out of the office where there boss was. He stood in front of even one withe a look of angry on his face. He wasted a seconds then stored to spoke. " Gust a few moments ago a body was find of a young girl, she was murder and placed on a pack bench. The young girl was Clara." The room felt like someone had left the AC on for to long. "It...it cant be" said Cassidy " yes it is what you are thing unfortunately. It's the boss daughter" Mr.hender stated now with a look of sorrow on is face.

  Suddenly the bathroom door opened and the boss emerged from it he look around the room and said in a low tone "I got to go home and tell my wife for it would be beast coming from me, if you need me for anything do not hesitate to call". " We will catch the mother fuck that did this" James side trying to comfort the boss. " I know we will." reply bass as he turned for the boor to live. The room fell quiet for a moment then Mr.heaner said " Ok listen up our job is to catch the person that did this,so here are the details Clara was last seen by her friend as she lift from here house at 6 and she was find at 9:21. the park the she was find in is 30 min away from the house. That gives the murder about four house and  5 min from the time she life her friend's house, to get her and kill her, to the time she was find. I need you guys to go get video  camera footage from the streets and ask if anyone saw or hear something strange.

  They need to work fast but for some reason no one seen or hared anything. The street comers was unless because with in a 20 black radius is they was out. It became apparent that is was a will plant murder and that who ever did this thought of ever thing. At this time Nate and Tom want to go see the body. Who Ever did this show no mercy there was cuts all over her body and all her origins was removed. " look At the incision made they look very skilled like they know what they where doing, So the person is probably has a medical background." Inferred Tom."Look in the toxicology report there is toxin in her bloodstream, that is the poison from a puffer fish, but way...." Nate suddenly stop with a look of disbelief on his face . " Toxin can paralyze the parson body, but the parson is still fully conscious" stated Tom. " That would mean that she could feel ever thing that was happening to her, but could not call out for help" Nate side staring in to her eyes as if he could see the murder as it was happening.

  It was late and all they had was a time frame, the murder had a medical background and that she could feel ever thing that happened to her. It was not a lot of evidence to go on, and they did not have anyone as a suspect. Ever one was tired, consternation and could not focus, so Mr.heaner let them go home " Ever one get a good night sleep and be more vigilance, for we do not have a clue who did this and how is was do" said Mr.heaner as he walked out the door.

  The next morning ever one came in not feeling any better then what the had felt yesterday. No one know where to start or where to go to get a lead on the care. Tom sate down and the cheer squeak, he toned out his computer and saw a new message. He clicked on it read a little and called Nate to come and see it. Nate begone reading it out loud " Hello. How are you gays did you find any clue too who I am yet, of core not I mean after all I did plane this to the T. You will not know who i am until I see it fit, and know is not the time I'm just getting started in this little game. But if you think you can catch me I'll be at that the old abandoned factory on Sun Seat and Adidas ave at 9:21 pm. If you bear to go some one will live in a body bag. sincerely; Look With in."

  That night at the factory Nate, Tom, James and, Alicia what to the factory. They had been there scent 8 o'clock  because they wanted to coast the perimeter. James and Alicia looked outside and Nate and Tom was inside. As Nate walked up the stare he got a scant that he was here before, but he couldn't remember when or way. There was nothing weird about the factory. 9:21 was approaching so James and Alicia cane back in. 9:21 came and want but there was no sign of the murder. 9:25, 9:39, 9:48 all came and want and still on murder. So James and Alicia want outside to look. At 10:21 a loud siren like sound appear out of no where. " WHAT IS GOING ON!" screamed Tom " I DON'T KNOW!" yelled Nate. " ARE YOU GAYS GO" ask James over the walkie talkie "YES, COM......" The walkie talkie stop working out of the blue.

 "DAME" said James " ARE THEY OK, WHAT DID THEY .." the sound stop Alicia began talking again " what did they say." " Nothing, let's get back" replied James. Nate and Tom started to look for the source of the sound, then they split up because there was two ways to go. Nate want life and Tom want right. Nate run down the hall. Made a right then, want in a room all of a sudden he fell, it felt like something had hit him over his head. Tom way took him outside and in to this big failed in the back. So he turned around and hand back. There at the door was a man. Tom walked closer, he could see that the person had his gun out, so Tom pulled his out. The man run to Tom, and now Tom could see his face but before he could say a word and pull his trigger. The man had shout Tom.Tom fell to the ground and there he lay dying.

  When Nate come to it had been 2 days. He work up in the hospital with a concussion and he could hardly remember anything. Nate ask about Tom but they would just avoid tell him. When Mr.heaner came he told Nate what had happen, but Nate would not believe it.Tom was like Nate's best friend. Nate was going to catch and make the person pay for doing this. " Nate I know how you fell and I know you want to get the person who did this but you most rest, there for I'm taking you off the case," " You cant I'm the beast person on this time!" Nate said in a furious voice "I,m sorry but I have to do this."  reply  Mr.heaner.

  Nate return home but he had not gave up.But there was no evidence and they was not close to having suspect. Nate didn't know what to do, or where to go. Nate set in his chair an thong and thong and thong. Nothing came to mind but something was not right.There was a peace of paper on his table. Nate quickly walked over to it and begin reading it " Hello Nate it was fun kill your partner Tom. But not as much fun as it will be killing you. I'm going too kill ever one that is apart of the murder investigating team. But you should not be worried about that you should be worried about if him still in your house."

  Nate quickly pulled out his gun and stared to slowly walk around his house. He look all downs stair but find nothing. Then he want upstairs  there was only two room, and one was the bathroom. Has Nate grow closer to the door a sound stated  it was soft at first, but as he got closer it grower louder. Ever thing want black. Nate open his eye. "Noooooo , way must I always wake up at the beast part of my dreams!"  He yelled. Nate looked at his clock watch said 9:21, " I'm going to be late for school" said Nate. Nate was in the 5th grand. He got up and open his door. Nate wince because he though he had sew a grower version of him at the door but there was no one there.